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Sculpture Final by JessicaDru Sculpture Final by JessicaDru
It's done!
Well, as done as it'll get. I enjoy the rough texture of tooled clay.

I need your help, of the three back-side images, I can't decide which angle I like best, gimme your opinion. I'd like to submit my sculpture for a best of term competition my school is having and need a front back and detail shot to give them.

Clay: Medium non-sulfur plasticine
Class: Character Maquette
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I saw that you did this one quite a long time ago, still I wanted to write a critique as you requested it.

It is obvious that you have a good knowledge of proportions, especially the face is very well done. The woman's arms are very thin at the shoulders, but not too thin. It is interesting that you highlighted the muscles on the upper parts of the arms because in comparison to that, the muscles on her thighs are rather weak. The woman makes the impression of being a well trained dancer, skinny and thewy at the same time. The pose fits excellently and so does the mask.

There are only little and few things which could have been done even better: First is the neck which is a bit too long. Going down, her breasts are next, which could have been closer too each other. The space between them seems a little too big. Last, the belly button should be a little bit lower, closer to the hips.
It could have been interesting if you had colored the mask to set an additional highlight.

Still, a very good piece! Worth mentioning is your personal style of scultping. Your work on the sculpture remains visible in the surface which is not absolutely smooth. This gives the woman a unique character which is very important as there is no clothing that could do that.

Summary: Very well crafted and creatively designed with only few things to improve.
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Norseman2war Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Absolutely stunning work!! I am so jealous of you skill. 
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JessicaDru Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
hehe, i love sculpting. most of my skill is just a lot lot lot of practice ^_^
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AlkaPralka92 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
i like it +fav 
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JessicaDru Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
<3! thank you
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chernushka1000 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
Oh, it's so sensually, it seems that she is now emit sound.
Superbly...
As soon as I saw this, I immediately added to my favorites because it's fantastic!
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JessicaDru Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you very much!! i have another sculpture, that when i'm done, i'll be posting pictures here. i looove working in clay
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chernushka1000 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
I look forward to new work from you, it gives me great pleasure to see them!
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Peterkat Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is cool! I always wanted to do clay sculptures, but never really had the time to learn. I have some polymer clay, but i haven't time to do the real deal yet. I have been doing wood sculptures and such. Do you have a way to process the your finish product on how to mold your figure sculpture?
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JessicaDru Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I am pretty crappy at making molds. so i haven't made any.

tho i plan to sculpt a friend from work, and then have him cast the mold of the sculpture. will be a cool experiment
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Peterkat Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I haven't done an actual process of molding a aculpture, but I'm working on it soon. :)
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