I really like the one on the right, I feel you did a great job of capturing a feeling there. The one on the left I feel is a bit weak. The torso feels strange to me like it's too 'tall'. Maybe just the model?
yeah, the one on the right is my favorite as well. the left one was the first drawing i did that night. so it's me warming up, but the costume is why i posted it. I see what you mean about the torso. or the general proportions. ^_^
They are both amazing and I love how you capture the intensity and passion in his face. The one on the right is my favorite... it kind of looks like the brother from the Last of the Mohican's! You have such skill! I love it!
Your work is one of the few I will always halt my inbox cleanouts to first check out. I've been snowed with retouching work and shooting for ad agencies so not much else happening here. Do you still use ICQ or other chat programs these days?